Tuesday, 8 November 2016

An Important Day
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       Have you ever thought that you know someone very well and then found out that you hardly knew that porson at all ? this happened to me with my parents. I thought i knew they well, until one day something happened that changed my attitude toward they. Let me explain how i used to see my parents, what happened, and how it changed me.
            When I was little, I was in foster care by the grandmother and the maid were at home. my parents worked from morning to evening. when they go to work often I was still asleep and when the designers back home they are too tired to play with me. sometimes I envied my friends can play minimum with their mother. they are too busy with their own world and forget about me.
            And one day, when I was playing with my friends, I had an accident were quite serious and require me to in operation. I realized when I saw my parents were asleep on the couch, I'm glad they were there with me, when they know I am aware they walked toward me and call a doctor. my parents were very worried about my condition, the next morning I thought they would leave me to work but it was not only my father who left when I finished breakfast and come to be with me all afternoon. while my mother accompanied me throughout the day. I was thinking I hope I did not recover that my parents are always there and accompany me. till I finally came out of hospital I thought I would be alone again and my parents are busy with their work, but I was wrong because they still consider me and my mother decided to stop working and focus on taking care of me. I am very happy because they are actually very affectionate and caring with me.

            From then on, I learned two important things. First, I learned that even though my parents seems it does not matter, they are a very caring person and cared for me. Second, I learned that one must be very careful not to judge people. A person might look hard on the outside but be quite different on the inside

14 comments:

  1. Wow good experience. But yu i dont know which one your main idea

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  2. Nice paragraph and good experience

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  3. wow , really nice paragraph

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  4. It is a cool composition girl :)
    you wrote it well
    but it will be better i think if you change ' I thought they would leave me to work but it was not only my father who left when I finished breakfast and come to be with me all afternoon. '
    becomes
    " I thought they would leave me to work but it didn't happen,my father was the only one who left when I finished my breakfast and came to be with me all afternoon. "
    good job ;)

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  5. Wow that's good article. for my oppinion maybe you can change "when they go to work often I was still asleep" supposed to " they worked when I was still asleep". Thankyou

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  6. wow, its good article, but you used dificult word

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  7. Nice article that you had described there. I think you need to check your article in the second paragraph. Especially about "when they go to work" into when the went to work". Actually i really like your article. Nice job :)

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  8. Hi, Ayu. I think the word "they" in the third sentence (1st paragraph) "...that changed my attitude toward they" should be replaced with "them". Tq :)

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  9. How sweet your parents are!
    Keep writting

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  10. Hello Ayu
    Your article is so nice. I just suggest you to pay attention with the capitalization letter for each first sentence. Because I think it's the one of important things to writing an article. That's all and have a good day :)

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  11. Hai ayu! It's amazing article but I think you have to fix in paragraph two "asleep" became "a sleep" keep writting😊

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  12. Hello Ayu!!
    what a good article,girl. But I give you suggest for this one "when they know......" . I think you should change know to knew 😁 thank youuu

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  13. it;s a good idea to wrote it
    good job:)

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  14. Comment back immediately please

    Hey baby I noticed a typo you did. I believe word that you mean with "porson" is actually "person"

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