Research on Music
I. Topic sentence
Paragraph 1
: What are their favourite genre ?
paragraph 2
: 85% of them said POP.
paragraph 3
: 13% of them chosen KLASIK.
paragraph 4
: 2% choose alternative RAP
Music is a form of entertainment
that puts sounds together in a way that people like or find interesting. Most
music includes people singing with their voices or playing musical instruments,
such as the piano, guitar, or drums.And then how about the teenagers ? What are
their favorite genre ? to find out, i conducted a survey. I asked each of my
friends what he or she favorites genre. After that, i realized that there are
three answers : POP, KLASIK, and RAP.
The genre with the most answers is
POP . 85% of them said POP. When i asked them about their favorite genre,
almost all of them said POP. They said POP song is fun and energic. The other
voter of this option said POP song also give us spirit to do something.
About 13% of them opt for KLASIK.
KLASIK music has a quiet demeanor and gentle. especially for pregnant women to
listen to klasik music is the recommended because it can make the fetal brain
can have a more rapid progression, because the brain is in a relaxed condition.
In addition, listening to klasik music will also stimulate the right brain
intelligence. The right brain has a major function in terms of creativity,
personality, language, art, and can also increase the senses become better
listeners and sensitive.
And about 2% of them chose RAP.
because there are some of them say that RAP is the kind of song that can make
us more relaxed and can forget the little load that we experienced during the
day. RAP make music because we swayed and danced to the rhythm of the song
In conclusion, most of my friends
choosed music POP because Music POP is fun, while the other most common choise
is KLASIK because it calm, And the rest of them choose RAP because RAP is moved
by inspiration.
ayu maybe you can change your font and mark your main idea. actually good.
ReplyDeleteHello Novi,
ReplyDeleteI'm kind of surprised that classical music is included in the list because I rarely find people loving it around me.
The word should be classic, not klasik. And it should be chose, not choosed (see the last paragraph).
Thank you.
wow your writing is very informative :)
ReplyDeleteyou are so cool in writing ;)
But according to me
it will be better if you change " About 13% of them opt for KLASIK. KLASIK music has a quiet demeanor and gentle. especially for pregnant women to listen to klasik music is the recommended" become
"About 13% of them chose Classic. classic music has a quiet demeanor and gentle melody . it is also recommended for pregnant women to listen to classic music"
the rest is very nice (y)
Good job ;)Good job
Hello...
ReplyDeleteit's a good article. you have a good idea to wrote it.
good job:)
Hi Ayu! Klasik is indonesian language, isn't it? In english, kalsik is classic. By the way, you have a good explanation about it. Good!
ReplyDeletehi Ayu, i think its to be better if you change "energic" become "energetic"
ReplyDeleteBy the way, you have a good explanation about it. Good!
Hayhooo
ReplyDeleteThis is very interesting to read. I got so exicited and curious. You did it!
Hi Ayu
ReplyDeleteThat's good paragraph. For my oppinion maybe you can change the "klasik" to be "classic". Keep it up.... Ayu
Thank You
Nice article novi. Maybe you can do another cross-check on your writing and fix the one that need to be fixed. Keep improving
ReplyDeletehi Ayu. it is good article
ReplyDeleteby the way may you can fix your instruction above,before you are going to make paragraph
thank you
Nice paragraph
ReplyDeleteNice paragraph
ReplyDeleteHi ayu!
ReplyDeleteI think that your article is usefully, keep writing yaa!:)