Friday, 21 October 2016

BIG PROBLEM IN JAKARTA AND THE SOLUTION

Jakarta is the capital city of Indonesia and one of the most modern city. It is also the Reviews largest and the most Populous city in Indonesia. Jakarta but still has big problems, one of them is traffic jam. Nowadays, traffic jams are everywhere in Jakarta. In 2012, there was once a four-hour traffic jam in Jakarta. People went home at 6 pm and they arrived at their home at midnight. It was so terrible, Because It made everyone feel tired and stressed out. If this keeps happening, jakarta will no longer be a comfortable place to live in. The government has made some effort to reduce traffic congestion in Jakarta, such as making the overpass, make the busway lane, additional taxes when purchasing a vehicle, road widening, etc.

As Jakarta Residents, do you know that we can do something? I believe that there are three things that can be done by Jakarta Residents to the make Jakarta free from traffic jam.

First, reduce using private cars. What causes jakarta always be in the traffic jam is Because everyone loves using Reviews their private cars. Even for going to near places, they still use Reviews their cars Although they can use bicycle or just take a walk. Moreover, there are many families every single member has Whose Reviews their own single car. All of the make Jakarta Reviews These crowded. It would be better if we reduce using private cars and Proceeds using public transportation. By using public transportation, it will lessen number of private cars.
Second, every single obey traffic rules. Besides the number of cars, traffic jam is also the caused by disobeying traffic rules. For instance, drivers park Reviews their cars on the edge of the street even though there is a prohibited sign to stop. It causes traffic jam Because they stand in the way of other cars to passing by. People also make a U-turn even they are not allowed. Furthermore, when the traffic light is red, there are some people who cut in the line so that it blocks up the way. That's why i think it is important for us obeying traffic rules. Last, behave. Behave is also a solution for traffic jam. There are many cases roomates shows bad behavior on the street that causes traffic jam. For all motorcyclist, they should not take the sidewalk Because It bothers can detain pedestrians and other vehicles. To put in a shell, a traffic jam in Jakarta can be coped with by reducing the use of private cars, every single obeying traffic rules, and behaving.
Reviews These three solutions are simple for us to do. It is a proof that we, as Jakarta's residents, Also have a role in coping with this problem, not only the government.
So, if there are no more traffic jams and citizens want more jakarta keep the environment around them I am sure Jakarta would be a better place for us to live and can be enjoyed by future generations as well.

 

8 comments:

  1. Hi ayu! Nice article
    But, I think there is some mistake on the 4th paragraph (first sentence). So ut will be better if you check again and probably fix it. Tq

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  2. Hi Ayu
    Your article is good enough. You follow the instruction that Mr. Emillius said before. I like it. However, to be more clearly about it, I suggest you to underline the outline. I will be better to us, as the reader to understand goodly what messages that you give to us. That's all and have a good day :)

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  3. Hi Ayu
    That's good article, for my opinion your article still have a many error capitalization like " Review" and "the Populous city", but for all is good. keep it up, Ayu

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  4. Hi ayu, nice article. Keep practicing😊

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  5. Interesting article! Keep writting yaa :D

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  6. Comment mine too
    Interesting! Good job!

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  7. Hi, Ayu. Nice aricle. Keep it up :)

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