Wednesday, 5 October 2016


 A Future Teacher

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                Ratih really like children, she is very tolerate children usual others  say very annyoing

                First of all, Ratih likes working and play with children. She very enthusiastic when it spoke to them, doing activities with them, and listening to their stories. Furdermor, she cares about children alo. I think she would make a good teacher because of these qualities.

                Second, Ratih very sensitive she will be sad to see children sad, she would do a lot of ways that children can smile and laugh again and sometimes she was always able to see the children who had a problem and always be a good listener and adviser.

                Finally, Ratih is trustworthy and responsible. She always does wht she says she’s going to do, she can always does what she says she going to do. She can always be a listener, friend talk and advisory good for children can always make children happy and cheerfull. She would be a wonderfull role model for young students.



1a. I think Ratih wouldmake a good Teacher
1b.

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Main idea
-likes play with children
-very sensitive
-trustworthy
Supporting point
-working with children
-very anthusiastic
-care about children
-would do a lot of ways that children can smile
- would do a lot of ways that children can laught
-good listener
-keep responsible
-friend talk
-advisory goood for children
1c. Ratih is my friend from Bali, this time she was studying in SARASWATI. Ratih very kind and patient she many people profer because of it’s
2a. She cares about childrenca lot
2b. Ratih very sensitive and will be sadto see children sad
2c. Ratih is trustworthy and responsible
 

14 comments:

  1. Hello Novi,
    nice paragraph you have there. It's understandable and I love the way you tell us about your friend.

    I just want to give some suggestions, correct me if I'm wrong ya. ^^

    I think 'really like' in the first sentence should be 'really likes'.
    'play with children.' should be 'playing with children'.

    'she very enthusiastic'should be 'she is very'.

    And sorry but I don't understand this sentence : she is very tolerate children usual others say very annyoing. ( :") )


    Thank you! Have a great day^^

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  2. Ratih is a very positive person
    it will be a suitable job for her in the future.

    btw you may recheck some of your words like "Ratih very sensitive she will be sad to see children sad" better if you change it to be "Ratih is very sensitive. She will be sad if she sees children sad"
    then it will be a gorgeous paragraph

    keep writing girl ;)

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  3. Hai ayu, it's a nice paragraph. For first paragraph I Think 'furdermor' should be 'furthermore'. correct if I'm wrong okay..

    Good job!!

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  4. Good work Novi! Keep learning😚

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  5. Good work Novi! Keep learning😚

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  6. Hi, Ayu. I think I saw some typos on the last paragraph. Nice article. keep it up

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  7. Nice article, Novi but in the last paragraph i see the wrong typo like "wht" maybe you can change to "what"

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  8. Great paragraph you typed there, Nice job!!!

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  10. I think the first sentence should be "Ratih really likes children, she is a very tolerate children" rather than "Ratih really like children, she is very tolerate children" and "Second, Ratih very sensitive " should be "Second, Ratih is very sensitive." and don't forget to add a proper punctuation on every sentences to make it easier to read.
    overall, nice writing.

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  11. good job...maybe you have changed your blog

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  12. Good job ayu.
    But i think the step can you move to beginning

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