Tuesday, 11 October 2016

THE BAST STUDENT

Paragraph 1 : what this person is doing today
                Topic sentence : Maretta is the popular student in SMAN 5 Denpasar
                Fact or example : she is a really actively looking for info race KIR
Paragraph 2 : the road to success
                Topic sentence : Maretta always practice and do our best for the race
                Fact or example : Great 1 in Universitas Negeri Andalas
                                                   Great 2 in Universitas Negeri Yogyakarta
                                                   Great 2 in Universitas Negri Jendral Sudirman
Paragraph 3 : two characteristics that led to success
                Topic sentence : trying and do not give up
                Fact or example : Maretta always read a book, look for references and ask the supervising teacher of the report to be in the race and always practice for a presentation and answer questions with the jury.

MARETTA THE BAST STUDENT
                Maretta is one of the outstanding students at SMAN 5 Denpasar. she is an active person looking for information about races. so it is not surprising that many students there know about his achievements.
                Maretta always give our best effort for his presentation, but she never forgot the lessons in the classroom. not only in the race Maretta also excel in the classroom, she was always in the top 5 class rank. she is also a good person and friendly to have a broad insight as often seek information on topics he discussed in the presentation. Maretta also get free fitting at the University Negeri Andalas.
                In my opinion, Maretta has two characteristics that make it outstanding students. First she was always diligent in reading books, searching for information, and ask questions or consultation with teachers builder. so I think she can be a role model for all students in the future. The second she is a friendly person despite her achievements but she was not arrogant and willing to share knowledge that she had as a younger classes or other garden friends. because I believe affability Maretta get a good job and has many friends.
 
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12 comments:

  1. Hana11 October 2016 at 07:50

    you should change him to her,but it's a good paragraph,i like it

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  2. Unknown11 October 2016 at 07:50

    Hi Ayu, actually I don't know the meaning of "the bast" or maybe you mean "the best?" You should Becareful

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  3. Unknown11 October 2016 at 08:13

    you should be carefull, your blog good pragraf
    tanhkyou

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  4. Unknown11 October 2016 at 08:14

    #typo

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  5. Unknown11 October 2016 at 08:27

    Hai ayu, for the title I still confused about bast or best student.
    Good paragraph😊

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  6. Unknown11 October 2016 at 08:38

    Hi Ayu
    it's a nice paragraph

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  7. Unknown11 October 2016 at 09:05

    Hi Ayu
    That's a good article, for my opiniom maybe you can change this sentence "or other garden friends". supossed to be a "or other chilhood friends"

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  8. Unknown11 October 2016 at 09:25

    Maretta, her name is exactly the same as my matriculation friend's name. By the way I like race too. Race to got you! 😙😄

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  9. Unknown11 October 2016 at 09:31

    Your blog can motivate many people ;;)

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  10. Unknown11 October 2016 at 11:42

    hi Ayu!
    In my opinion,you should change "his achievements" >> "her achievements". Because Maretta is a girl,right?
    Thank youuuu!

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  11. Unknown11 October 2016 at 23:10

    Hi Ayu :)
    Don't forget to underlined the topic sentences. I still confusing about what is the meaning of first sentence in paragraph 2.

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  12. Gloria Susilo19 October 2016 at 19:40

    Hello Ayu. It's a nice paragraph. I like how you describe about your friend. I think your friend is amazing like you. Keep it up and good luck

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