Tuesday, 18 October 2016

My Hometown


10 comments:

  1. Hi, Ayu :) I think it would be better if you look straight to the camera and talk in a more relax way :) Good job, keep it up!

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  2. Wow nice video you had described there. But i think that you should to try pay attention too. Especially about eye contact. On the other hand, I really like your videos ayu novia. Nice job :)

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  3. Hi Novi
    that,s good video, but sometimes i can't hear your sound cleary. But for all is good, keep it up.

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  4. Hi Novi, I like your video but you should make your voice louder

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  5. I cant hear your voice with clear

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  6. you have a cool video ayu
    i like your hometown, take me there u.uu

    by the way, don't be so serious , take it easy and look at the camera more often
    owyeah 'es wel es' dear not 'as wel as' (to pronounce as well as) ;)

    overall I like this ;) fighting !

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  7. Haii ayuu!! You look beautiful😊
    I want to visit your hometown. Keep practicing

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  8. Hello Ayu!!
    I suggest you have to prepare enough what do you want to say before you make this video:)
    goodjob✨

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  9. Hello Ayu. I very appreciate your video. I see that you can be more brave with this video. I like it. But, I suggest you to record with a good camera because in this case, your voice is not clear enough. That's all and good luck always :)

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  10. Hi Ayu :) I like how you described your hometown! Please take me there hahahah.
    But I think you have to give more eye contact to the camera and practise more to make your pronunciation better :)

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